Hi,
Thanks very much for your comments. I do see what you mean about the mixed levels of information I've put in there, it was something that occured to me when I read through it again later and I guess that's the sort of thing you learn to deal with through practice.
As for defining a specific audience, to be honest at the moment I'm not sure. I don't think I'd be being big headed in saying that I definately know more than average Joe and that confining myself to writing for a none techy ordiance wouldn't be all that interesting in the long run. At the same time I'm a little nervous about writing something directed at the infosec community because I'd be worried about putting something in that's not strictly accurate which wouldn't really aid my future credibility... Thank you for your offer - If and when I suss things out audience-wise I may well take you up on it.
On the subject of my uni course, I've now completed the foundation degree and got a commendation for it from the uni, So I'm pretty happy on that front at the moment
